Could someone help me with my grammar..its a reflective short writing?

• When I read the lyrics to the song I felt a joy in my heart. It is inspirational and Linda Creed definitely sees the joy in children and believes that children’s attitude towards life should be an example for adults because children possess inner beauty. They are the hope for the future and their laughter remind us how we all used to be. It shows that everyone no matter the age needs a hero. That most adults depend on themselves and that we should never depend on anyone shadows. That nobody can take anyone’s identity. I love this song because it says that the greatest love of all is within ourselves and that we must love ourselves because nobody will love us more. This song is sweet and powerful at the same time. It is a strong women talking about the children are joy and that we should invoke the joy and laughter each children have. Their innocence and happiness should be copy by adults. We all have a special place that leads us to a lonely place but we can find our strength in love and that love is within ourselves. I've often felt ambivalent about this song. On the one hand, I like the message, about discovering your own strength. But on the other hand, there are so many others out there who don't have it all together and aren't even self-aware. Some who actually require help in figuring things out. (Don't we all, at some point). This song is beautifully sung but even if you just read the song the choice of words are soothing to the soul and are magical. This song made me feel happy because it has a positive message carried from the beginning of the song to the end. This song makes me feel like we should cherish each and every child because they are our hope for the future. In addition, this songs makes me feel that we should mirror the actions of children because children are so happy, worry free and always laughing and as we grow up we tend to separate ourselves from people and loose that smile and happiness we once had as a child. As adults everyone has problems that we did not have as children and most adults try to isolate themselves to feel comfort but the true love and joy we carry within and we have to learn how to be our greatest love of all and to smile like children do.